Shadow Mamba Free Download

If you have an e-reader of some sort, like a Kindle or iPad (or Adobe’s free computer program, Digital Editions), feel free to download my latest short story, Shadow Mamba, for free. Click here to get yourself a copy!

Here’s a brief description:
He used to be the chief of police. Now, he is JUDGE, JURY, and EXECUTIONER. He is SHADOW MAMBA — one mad cat on the hot trail of a cold killer who framed him for murder. Little did the killer know: don’t tangle with the mamba, or else he’ll make you pay – In BLOOD. The day they framed him for the murder of his family was the day VENGEANCE was born. SHADOW MAMBA. RATED R — for REVENGE.

2 thoughts on “Shadow Mamba Free Download

  1. Hi E.E.:

    Wow, has it been that long since I downloaded Shadow Mamba? But… did you know good things come to those who wait? So without further ado, I must say your descriptive words make your characters come alive on the page.

    Although I’m not a fan of blood and guts, your story kept me captivated.

    I hope you don’t mind, but I thought I throw you a few tips that I’ve learned from my amazing editor.

    Instead of saying, “his eyes moved”, say his gaze moved or dropped or whatever else you deem appropriate. Body parts can’t move. And instead of “ears perked”, you might say, “his ears twitched.”

    In one paragraph, you wrote a sentence Mamba was thinking and you added, “he wondered,” which isn’t wrong. But move the second sentence in front of his thought that way you won’t have to use a tag.

    E.E., those are just a few little things that stood out. I trust you took my constructive criticism in the spirit it was intended.

    Now to end on a positive note or two. Your story would make a great series and you have an amazing career ahead of you.

    I look forward to reading, “Killing Sabrina,” but I think I might be in for more blood and guts. LOL

    Tracy Campbell

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